Monday, June 19, 2006

Haiku





Pathway stealing me
toward rock, heat, water damningly
hovering quietly




more haiku at one deep breath

7 comments:

Jennifer S. said...

what an interesting and unexpected photo. where is this? Great haiku too!

Annie Jeffries said...

Fascinating. Please tell us about this photo. You haiku perfectly expresses what we see here with an edge of the ominous hidden within it.

madretz said...

Yea, you gotta tell us where this is!
It makes me think of an escalator to heaven because I perceive it to be upward bound. Although I don't imagine rocky hills in my heaven. :)

Catherine said...

Rock, heat, water - is it a geothermal area? Or is it the heat of the sun? A very intriguing haiku

Kim said...

Perfect! The Haiku and image are wonderful.

Tammy Brierly said...

Your words were perfect for this amazing photo. Sounds like a view to a dam.

Endment said...

I have to join the chorus and ask - about the photo... :)
Wonderful haiku but the picture really caught my imagination